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[IELTS] Task 2 Parent and family background have more influence than teacher

Parent and family background have more influence than teacher of a young person's learning and academic achievement. Discuss. I would sayWhile others think that learning through academic education can encourage a young fellow to choose its desired career.On one hand, there are several benefits if the young person have has the good background of parents and family. First[font#008000]ly[/font], it is believed that the parents and family will help their children to know the fastest way leading to success, avoid[font#008000]ing[/font] the mistakes and reducingwaste of time. In Viet Nam, if your parents or your relatives have a good position in the government, you it will be very easy for you to get a wonderful job after your graduation. Besides, children who was born in the family with high income, if financially provided, will be trying their best to enhance their academic performance and promise more glorious future[I couldn't understand this point. No sooner do the children If children could get much money from their family than then they don't would not have to worry about anything more any other thing.,They can buy all necessary material and only focus on studying then. Thirdly, stable mentality is the third advantage of this condition. This, in turn, elevates their belief in yourself themselves, in your their future, followed by many successes in not only their studyingies andbut also in career.On the other hand, the idea of supporting children to cultivate more knowledge and academic achievement is equally beneficial. To some extent, by dint of being inspired to pursue the degrees and study, children can train many skills to be more confident, ready to overcome the troubles in their future and become a successful and respected people. After all, success is not something got within some days, but during one's life-time actually. Such Some famous people such as Ho Chi Minh, Thomas Edison are telling examples of trying their best from their childhood. Besides, despite spending much time on learning and academic achievement, children fell feel proud of much money they themselves earn in earning money for themselves. With outstanding academic performance achieved in the children, their private image is promoted in the workplace while the others using money and relation to apply for a job feel pressured and are not easy to get higher position. Politically Precisely speaking, only when all children get much learning and academic achievement can the children can become the good citizens and devote more to the society. For example, Japanese have many good degrees, which creates many of them the quality employees and stimulates the companies in Japan.In my view, to gain the best, children should try their best to learn and get academic achievements whereas their parents and families can bring more help for them

HiI am also preparing for IELTS and the correction for your essay is solely my own understanding of it. Perhaps some readers from natives could evaluate your essay in a better way than mine. RegardsUmar

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